You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
Dear Sir,
I hope you will find the letter in the best of health and happiness. I saw your brochure which was enclosed with today's newspaper. After reading your brochure, I felt excited to hear that you are organizing seven days of trekking in the mountains of the Himalayas.
Since I am a traveler, I like to see the beautiful destinations around the world, especially the ones which have mountains because I like the different types of flora and fauna. It would be a great chance to see the wildlife during the time of stay in the Himalayas.
I would request you to please provide more information such as dates and price for each person so that I can communicate in my Whatsapp travelers group. Also, please share the types of equipment needed to bring on this trip.
Further, I want to ask that will I encounter any fitness issues while walking during the entire trip as I have gained a lot of weight in the past two months. I would be grateful to you for sharing any fitness concerns that I can face during this trip so that I could ensure and prepare myself to come to the trekking.
I am looking forward to hearing a prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I hope you will find the letter in the b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64319248826 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53912061652 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3976298853 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9090909091 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183593320622 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607071437974 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510847003627 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832452333814 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707303662205 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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