You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
Dear Sir,
I have received a brochure along with a daily newspaper I follow where a detailed information is given regarding a walking-tour in the mountains.
I am keen to take part in this one-week tour as it is my dream to go for a trek. I always wanted to ride a mountain to experience the journey all together as a group. I noticed that there is an age bar mentioned which is matching with me. Therefore, it is increasing my excitement as well.
I have observed that there are few informations missing in the brochure. As per the given steps, I would like to know about the date and prices. Along with this, if I could get itinerary details then I could start shopping accordingly.
I have a major concern to share with you, I am not physically fit as I had a leg operation 2 years back. Doctor suggested not to go for any cardio exercises or sports. If you could share some safety tips then it would be helpful.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
SN
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I have received a brochure along with a ...
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Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ce the journey all together as a group. I noticed that there is an age bar mentio...
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Line 8, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... go for any cardio exercises or sports. If you could share some safety tips then i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, look, regarding, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73136615405 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.635310958 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182954277622 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053915314654 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594809442578 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936263855955 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602423747781 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.