You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in a walking tour that is available in the Everest Hills.
Recently, I came across your brochure and caught an eye for the fun activity event. I liked the concept of the tour on foot, while the scenic beauty and serene top will be additional. Besides, if I get a chance to complete this adventure, it will be my first one since passing the graduation. So, I am interested in this trip.
Therefore, I would like to know details about the package including veterinary, cost fee, accommodation, and meal. The advertisement states that it is a 2-day trip.
However, I am an asthmatic person, I wanted to understand that is there any high-intensity activities activity or climbing involved. Even though as excited as I am, just wanted to disclose my fitness details beforehand.
Kindly let me know. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Emily Rose
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ht an eye for the fun activity event. I liked the concept of the tour on foot, w...
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Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'activities'' or 'activity's'?
Suggestion: activities'; activity's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8875 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92393142874 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8480147725 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1666666667 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134622413255 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432198909698 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450180569997 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706815213379 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546457704743 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.