Cause and effect of obesity and give your opinion.
Obesity is one of the important issues because its rising level is at an alarming level and affects everyone. This essay will show the reasons for the rise in obesity in this day and the ways in which it can be reduced.
Human misbehavior can create several mains causes of obesity. Firstly, people easily make mistakes in their lifestyle and activities, they usally do not have much or not enough time to eat breakfast fully and replace it they aet fast food. Secondly, lazy exercise is also a cause of obesity. For example, someone in a day only ate and sleep or worry about work and foget that exercise will easily attact excess fat. Last but not least, stress and insomnia also affect our health and weigh.
There are many measures to overcome obesity in the present time. For starters, people need to care about the people around them, especially fanily members to control unhealthy eating. We will warn people of the consequences of obesity and give reason able advice. Next, in school, in addition to learning teachers should give students entertainment and sports activities to improve health and prevent obesity.
In conclusion, obesity is a disease that threatens our health every hour. Beside that to stop and remove it, we should join hands and efforts together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...For starters, people need to care about the people around them, especially fanily members to control u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89861751152 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38452435099 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654377880184 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.610815457 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7692307692 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 5.23603664747 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140203580974 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505032512192 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463035670784 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750824385406 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303772376551 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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