The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent you do agree or disagree?
It is true that more and more young people are getting involved in crime and people believe that the likelihood of youth crimes which are giving serious concern to society can be minimized thanks to better parental skills. Although educating parents witch such skills could help address the issue, however, those ways need to be carried out simultaneously with many other measures to really work.
Parents are the closest people to their children and are the most likely to be able to have an impact on their children's behaviour so it is of vital importance to equip parents with skills for preventing youth crimes. A study indicates that juvenile offences are closely associated with parents' care to their children. Without timely guidance and frequent observation from father and mother, children find it intricate to distinguish between the right and the wrong as well as modifying their conduct to be appropriate, thus the large majority of youth crime nowadays is the result of inappropriate parenting, and a lack of childcare and crime education. Moreover, parents' behaviour, intentionally or unintentionally, exerts a strong influence on shaping a child's personality. Therefore, parents must be well-mannered to set an example for their children and that could make them well-rounded individuals and avoid breaking the laws.
However, education at home alone is not enough to reduce juvenile delinquency. In fact, children spent the largest amount of time at school, thence should continue to enhance comprehensive and proper education for young people to know their laws, rights and obligations in society. Additionally, governments should also apply some methods to prevent crime rate in youngsters, such as repel social evils and propagating what one will face when committing illegal activities.
In conclusion, enhancing skills to educate children at home is a good way to curb juvenile delinquencies. Nevertheless, only training parents is not enough to decrease crime rate among the young that it needs to implement with other solutions at the same time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 788, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...shaping a childs personality. Therefore, parents must be well-mannered to set an ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37423312883 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94055806 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60736196319 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0871634517 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310808532147 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111614336057 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509934434808 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177043763117 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509535106225 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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