Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to thank you, for recommending me to the training course that was held in Ontario, Canada.
Actually, this course was specially designed to cover the best practices that can be performed for people safety. Since, we are a startup so such an education will play a pivotal role in touching various milestones. Moreover, I got to know about the First Aid techniques that would also help to look after major injuries.
From last few months there has been seen an incline in accidents among our workforce while operating various machines. With such an awareness I believe it will be whittle down by 50% and I will ensure on it. Apart from it, with the pre-hospital treatment I assume risks of life will also be curbed and staff retention would be improved too.
Due to the fact that I am handling a huge count of 350 employees, thus, I believe that my 7 Team Leaders should also be trained for smooth implementation at ground level. Even if we arrange them for online course could also be beneficial, as practical part can be covered by myself and it will also helps to save a significant cost.
I hope you will give due consideration to the idea of training other employees and I am really thankful to you for all this.
Yours faithfully,
Roman Cook.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 300, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...n be covered by myself and it will also helps to save a significant cost. I hope y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, thus, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7423580786 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62662938722 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672489082969 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.5997028495 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7272727273 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165988631278 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646481310396 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075619603852 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11414418517 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938442183665 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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