Today, the internet has created that chance for ordinary people to become famous. Is it a positive or negative development?
In all times the popularity has been providing to a successful lifestyle. Today the internet has made the possibility for usual people to become famous and popular. I strongly believe that this is a beneficial trend in today’s society.
Firstly, the popularity leads to a successful life. It means that the human who has a big amount of money due to the fact that they are famous and popular is going to have an independent life. Therefore, people who have such life will be much happier than usual people. For example, my friend has a lot of money on his credit card, thus, he is traveling all over the world without any problems and enjoys his life. In other words, the popularity provides you with enormous amount of money that you can spend as you personally want, for traveling or to buying some exclusive cars or houses; all in all it leads to a freedom life.
Secondly, a successful life may be possible due to the fact that you are a talented person and doing interesting and popular things. In other words, with the help of the internet nowadays it is much easier to become famous if you are a positive person and do trendy things. For instance, my friend, who shoots some funny and interesting videos on Youtube platform, receives a big number of views and earns a huge amount of money owing to the fact that this website provides users with advertisement. Thus, if the person is well-known and talented somewhere in the internet, they could make money and live better than other people.
In conclusion, I am convinced that it is a positive tendency for talented people, owing to the fact that they can be noted by other humans and become happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65762711864 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53929757505 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48813559322 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2781024121 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161964102545 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714382454905 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10064432463 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127824207328 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702237077361 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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