Across the globe there has been seen a spike in the causalities associated with vehicles especially, among teens. Some people opine with the view that authorities must impose restrictions on riding motorcycles below 24 to whittle it down. Although, few people favors this idea but in my opinion this might have a grim effects.
There exists innumerable factors for opposing the ban on motorcycles and at the top of all is indispensable role associated with our daily life. A significant proportion of young population access these motorcycles to go to college for education. There is no adequate public transportation resources available in many countries and banning would hinder the education quality. Moreover, as these bikes are cheaper and convenient, plethora of people use it either to go for office or for providing delivery services. So, with such restrictions life of the young genration associated with these fields could come to halt. As a matter of fact, in England there are many restrictions imposed on motorcycles in 2018 due to which an incline in cars on roads has been witnessed and officials are under full stress to curb it. Indeed, banning is not a pragmatic approach to overcome the accidents on roads.
To tackle this issue authorities have to monitor the motor industries and do make some policies for the intensely powered vehicles. Firstly, there is a need to cap the speed and power of 2 wheeler. Because many incidents occurs due to over speeding and with such restrictions, rate could be declined. Secondly, categorizing the driving license requirements and adding new norms could also help to control the causalities. For an instance, cars have different categories, light motor, heavy motor, etc similarly bikes must be bifurcated on the basis of power. Last but not least, providing adequate roads with no path holes, proper safety signals and with great awareness, accidents could be attenuated.
Considering and keenly examining above-cited ideas, it can be implicated that banning is not a prompt action for preventing road accidents. Authorities, must do the necessary changes at ground level, either for acquiring a license or the types of bikes on road to bring down the gravity of road incidents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ut in my opinion this might have a grim effects. There exists innumerable factors fo...
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Line 3, column 530, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'restrictions'' or 'restriction's'?
Suggestion: restrictions'; restriction's
...viding delivery services. So, with such restrictions life of the young genration associated ...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'wheeler' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'wheelers'.
Suggestion: wheelers
... a need to cap the speed and power of 2 wheeler. Because many incidents occurs due to o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19283746556 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91351977337 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595041322314 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7316139955 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.722222222 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152640304677 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442850602829 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233393493323 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895625757309 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108230179866 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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