Question: Your Friend bought the tickets for the theatre for both of you
Write a letter to your friend you cannot go to the theatre. In your letter,
• Apologize
• Explain the situation
• Tell him what he can do with the extra tickets.
Dear Amit,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant and the best of spirits. It was generous of you to have booked theatre tickets for both of us. I was looking forward to it but unfortunately, due to some last-minute changes in my exam schedule, I will not be able to accompany you. Therefore, I apologetic for spoiling the plan.
I had my exam scheduled on 20th April a week after the theatre show because of the ongoing protests by the students union. It has been preponed and now the exam date coincides with that of our outing. Hence, it is not feasible for me to attend the performance.
Having said that. I have confirmed with the ticketing manager that the tickets are transferrable and can be utilized by anyone. Therefore you can take your sister along since she was also keen on joining us. But could not due to the non-availability of tickets.
I am sorry once again for being a spoilsport and I promise to make up for it.
Hope you have a great time!
Best Wishes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 129, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ferrable and can be utilized by anyone. Therefore you can take your sister along since sh...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5251396648 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66721018566 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642458100559 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9792832348 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3076923077 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258476884285 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768450075341 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670112718745 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119486270709 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583869577843 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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