You have recently learned about an opening for an internship at a local company that you are interested in. Write a letter to the director of the company. In your letter,
• introduce yourself
• explain how you learned about the internship
• explain why you would be suitable for the internship
Dear Sir,
I am writing in response to the advertisement in the newspaper about the internship program in java language at your company and want to apply for the same.
My name is Jot and I am a resident of Chandigarh. I have completed my bachelor in computer application, recently and learned Java language as my major language. I am very keen on learning new computer languages.
I have checked the newspaper in the morning and came to know about this opening. After learning about this opening, I researched your company and it comes to my consideration that your company is recognized for short term courses and internships. Apart from this, I handle clients of different nationalities.
Being a computer application student, I have knowledge of coding and aware of rules and regulation hence, I will need less training. I have built my bachelor's project on Online shopping for the well-renowned company in our area that is the Rehma Shopping Center. Hence, I assume that I am perfect for the internship. I am attaching my curriculum vitae and also my project synopsis for your reference.
Look forward to working with you.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n on learning new computer languages. I have checked the newspaper in the morni...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le clients of different nationalities. Being a computer application student, I ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03608247423 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00784127753 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.947030456 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1538461538 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225486134595 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728820149787 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582784448203 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126899466888 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447420849632 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.