Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers arebinffluenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
In this day and age, advertising is gaining popularity. It is one of the most essential part of business to help their products to be approached nearer to consumers. For this reason, buyers are confronted with the rise of advertisements. Do advertising affect to be consumers and what should be done to prevent this? Personally arguing, adverts have a debilitating effect on purchasers. Firstly, the quality of products which is advertised is always exaggerated simce advertisers praise their products to high heaven, which lead to the misunderstanding of comsumers and they can buy low quality stuffs without knowing in advance. Secondly, the target audience of some kind of products is children, who can easily be influenced by advertisements. Consequently, they will put pressure on their parents to buy them things. Moreover, children can take after the behaviors of characters on advertisements, which are sometimes not suitable for kids. In my opinion, to protect consumers against bad influence of advertisements, national authoritis should take actions without delay. Initially, advertising aimed at kids should be controlled strictly. All the contents of these adverts have to be censored. Also, the products that can be risk to healthy such as cigarettes must display warnings and unauthorize them to be marketed in a way that attracts children. To sum up, advertisements wreak havoc on consumers in different ways although it is a key part of business in the modern life. To prevent bad effects of advertisements, government should carry out comprehensive measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31263165713 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4761226536 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225664931093 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07143761542 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736515350651 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225664931093 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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