We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology.
How do you think it will change in the future?
Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?
Technology is one of the main subject in modern life. Although it makes people live uncomplicated, some people argue that the requirement to computer-based technology is soared. I believe that people will use their high tech, in near future, more than today; however becoming too depended on technology might bring negative consequences to people livestyle.
Today, roughly every industry run with technologies such as computers, software programs. In the past, when people had not computer or just calculators, people have had spent a dramatically much time in their workplace or study than now. Since, Artificial Intelligence (AI) have developed, many people changed their lifestyle toward computers, reducing their efforts in a workplace or just study. Now scientists are creating new version of smartphones, computer platforms, even smart buildings. So, anyone agreed to using technology in order to change their lifestyle.
On the other hand, while people depended on technology, it can cause health problems. Firstly, while working with electronic gadgets people spend much more time with their computers or notebooks , risking their eyes. The ultra violet ray, for example, releasing from monitor decrease humans seeing quality. The much time they spent in devices the more they become tend to hurt their central vision. Moreover, people might have disease with their vertebrae, sitting in chair. Scientist proved that when you sit in chair main load take individuals vertebrae. So, while people dealing with their work or study with computers, there is a risk in their heath.
To sum up, technology is the significant invention of scientists that reduce our effort to fulfil our responsibilities; furthermore people use them in their further life more than today. However, although electronic devices help to human beings, they might cause health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50522648084 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8133486374 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620209059233 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3867841128 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9411764706 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142260337975 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502371139558 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355854894809 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907204168049 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475047572998 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.