We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?
Nowadays, more and more people are relying on computers, making them an indispensable tool in our day-to-day activities. Computers are used by everyone, from houses to hospitals, making it very difficult to get through a working day without them. In this essay, we will discuss the adjustments of computers in the foreseeable future, as well as if it brings out negative effects when being abused too much.
To begin with, computers are radical in business. For instance, most online trades between enterprises are done with the minimum effort and time with the advent of computers. In addition, teachers can use computers in online teaching by staying at their place. During the Covid-19 pandemic and social distancing, since normal face-to-face classes cannot be used, computers can help to deal with the problem by running online classes for students to study. Thus, it is obvious that computers can be used in both business and teaching.
However, computers have their downsides. When we spend too much time on computers, there will be insufficient time for physical activities. As a result, our bodies will weaken over time, causing both mental and physical disorders for ourselves. Furthermore, the constant development of technology is accompanied by public concern for the privacy of their information. very dangerous for celebrities, making them feel unsafe all the time while their location or private documents can be sold for money.
To conclude, computers can bring many benefits for our daily life as it helps to do everything much easier. But in my opinion, its advantages can easily outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Very
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29230769231 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86909671784 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7358002657 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208653343145 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742801438236 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421305662721 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124474215917 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137246222226 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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