There have been many inventions in the human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Throughout the length of history, humans have come up with various invaluable inventions such as the wheel, steam engines and the airplane. Nowadays, there is an opinion that among all the things that have been devised, the internet is the most significant. Although the benefits of the internet in modern life are undeniable, I believe that its importance is not outweighed more two other inventions, namely electricity and fire.
It is true that in the digital era, the appearance of the internet has brought numerous advantages to people's life. Firstly, thanks to this advanced technology, many people now have access to many useful sources of information that are necessary for their work or study. To be more specific, information about various fields and aspects of life is shared freely online and available to everyone with an internet connection. Therefore, people can search for anything that they want within a very short amount of time. Besides, the internet is the platform on which diverse services rely on to operate. Facebook, for instance, is the most popular way of exchanging information among friends and family members despite large geographical distance, eliminating the need for old-fashioned and time-consuming tools, such as letters.
However, In my view, despite the mentioned merits of the internet, the role of the two following inventions is still more significant. First of all, fire is one of the most important elements of life. According to archaeologists, human ancestors discovered and used fire a very long time ago, it has totally changed the lives of primitive people. Humans have begun to use fire to cook food, chased wild beasts, got the light from the fire and warmed. In addition, another type of energy invented by Thomas Edison is electricity, which put into use in the early 19th century and has gradually replaced fire. Furthermore, this form of energy has set the platform for many other electrical-based inventions, all electronic devices operate by electricity and in the absence, the internet may never appear
In conclusion, although the internet gives us enormous benefits, yet other discoveries and inventions that are equally important. Each invention plays a different role and if without one, the others will not be invented.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27322404372 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89842679746 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598360655738 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0468250096 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.625 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241676359698 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736000114718 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553747884593 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143564679576 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739847898421 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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