People across the world associated with agricultutre sector are moving to cities for finding different job opportunities. Although, somebody thinks that this shift has flourished the cities immensely by providing enormous manpower, but in my opine this has grim affects. I will share my views on negative outcomes along with possible measures to curb it.
There are innumerable reasons to highlight the atrocious impacts of this shift from agriculture to other employment opportunites, especially in cities. Food plays a pivotal role in the development of nation. If the farm produce is declined than countries will have to rely on imports due to which the economy could be stressed. Moreover, production and prices are inversely proportional, hence shortage will spark the inflation. As a matter of fact, in 2019 Indian farmers had produced less onions due to administrative issues as a consequence to it prices for them crossed 100% from previous years. Apart from it, such a migration from rural to urban areas would bring serious problems such as, housing availabilty, population rise, crowd on streets etc.
On the other hand with pragmatic approach these affects could be whittle down. The foremost step is to make farming a business of profit. When people in agricultural background are getting a sound returns from their produce, than obviously, they will not seek for other opportunites. Moreover, weather is uncertain, so authorities must come up with the policies of crop insurance to support the people engaged in this sector from any crisis. At last but not least more focus is needed on crop rotation, because with diversification balance could be build in types of produce and will help immensely for keeping a control over prices and on health of agricultural land.
Considering and keenly examining the above-cited information it can be implicated that with little awareness and making someplans to lessen the risks for the people engaged in the agricultural sector could help them to retain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...otal role in the development of nation. If the farm produce is declined than count...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun onions is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ct, in 2019 Indian farmers had produced less onions due to administrative issues as ...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...ing a sound returns from their produce, than obviously, they will not seek for other...
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Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: LEAST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'least much'?
Suggestion: least much
...sector from any crisis. At last but not least more focus is needed on crop rotation, becau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, apart from, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2701863354 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89759541341 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636645962733 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0440332785 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.133333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227498646939 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636444404763 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432629916398 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127200492373 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277348567299 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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