You just moved to a new place and haven’t gotten a chance to tell your friend. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should say:
• where and when you move there
• the differences between your new place and the previous place
Dear Madan,
Hope you and your family are fine. If you remember that I told you at last letter, I mentioned that I was looking a new apartment as the lease of old apartment had expired. Happy to share you that I found a new apartment and moved to the apartment on 11th April and it is located in the Saidapet, Chennai .
The Apartment is studio type with lot of amenities like indoor game ,gym,park and swimming pool. You know that in my old apartment do not have the club house and swimming pool. Also the maintenance of the apartment is not upto worth for money what we gave. In this apartment people are hosting the lot of parties in the club house. I think in this year my birth day will host in this club house.
The good news is this apartment is very close to my office, I can reach my office within 15 mins, compared to old apartment will take 1 hour to reach the office. Finally, I am glad that now I get to spend more time with my family and further studies. I was thinking if you can come and visit me next month. There are many god restaurant and night clubs nearby my area and I sure we both will have great time
Regards
E.N.Gopi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d it is located in the Saidapet, Chennai . The Apartment is studio type with lot ...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e with lot of amenities like indoor game ,gym,park and swimming pool. You know tha...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , park
...h lot of amenities like indoor game ,gym,park and swimming pool. You know that in my ...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... have the club house and swimming pool. Also the maintenance of the apartment is not...
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Line 4, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... come and visit me next month. There are many god restaurant and night clubs near...
^^
Line 4, column 327, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'restaurants'?
Suggestion: restaurants
...isit me next month. There are many god restaurant and night clubs nearby my area and I s...
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Line 4, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...estaurant and night clubs nearby my area and I sure we both will have great time ...
^^
Line 4, column 409, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and I sure we both will have great time Regards E.N.Gopi
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Gopi
... will have great time Regards E.N.Gopi
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21266968326 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19609724588 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579185520362 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.727110767 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5833333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110982754206 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489863467407 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667520707708 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909891266099 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984035093865 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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