A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked in you to recommend a destination
Hi,
I got your letter and came to know you are vacation start soon.And you are planning your holiday trip.My suggestion to spend time in the holiday is Tirupati.Beause there you can find time to relax.With also you can visit lot of historical places,museum,Park,Water falls.Apart from that you can do the Forest trucking activities.These are all makes the trip as memorable event.Firstly,once your are reachd Tirupati,book the hotel based on your budget,after book the Venkatesh perumal Dharshan and worship the Perumal.Next you can visits to museum,Zoo.The zoo is very big around some 10 km,in there your family can see lot animals and birds and you can take pictures in therezoo.After that In the evening there is evening bazar ,there you go and buy something.In the mean time, I will share the trucking guide contact,he will care you in the trucking.There you can see lot of natural scenery place.I hope this trip,you will love and enjoy.
Thanks and regards
E.N.Gopi
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...ati, book the hotel based on your budget , than book the Venkatesh perumal Dharsha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46783625731 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12110098481 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2671539076 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.142857143 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 2.54639175258 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251973428796 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117551493321 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943916301293 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253584268332 0.12726935374 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635013506869 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.