A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and asked you to recommend a destination.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before-say where you went and where you stayed-say what you can yo

Essay topics:

A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and asked you to recommend a destination.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

-recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before

-say where you went and where you stayed

-say what you can you do there and what the food was like

Hello David,

I am writing to you with regards your last email about holiday destination.

My last summer holiday I visited Taiwan. I spend there 2 weeks and that was good enough to enjoy the island and local culture.

Firstly, I must to tell you that Taiwan is extremely hot island and you might be surprised but the weather is always very beautiful. Capitol of island is a place must to see there are many old buildings and Chinese temples which are stunning. The best place to stay in Taipei is a hotel or you can try to find a nice apartment via Airbnb. I would suggest you find apartment through Airbnb you can save a lot of money this way. There are many amazing restaurants with old traditional Taiwanese cuisine. The best food you can find on the night street food market, the best what I had there was sea food plater with BBQ sauce.

Secondly, I think it is very important to visit royal national park of Taiwan it is 2 hours drive from capitol city. It is very common to see there elephants and many endemic birds.

I hope my suggestion will help you with your travel.

All the best.

Tomasz Zawadzki

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2019-11-03 Dasiek 67 view
Essays by user Dasiek :

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...land and local culture. Firstly, I must to tell you that Taiwan is extremely hot i...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 163, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...beautiful. Capitol of island is a place must to see there are many old buildings and Ch...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 589, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... food market, the best what I had there was sea food plater with BBQ sauce. S...
^^^
Line 17, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...there elephants and many endemic birds. I hope my suggestion will help you with ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59512195122 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2833228758 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60487804878 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.192794412 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4615384615 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272463349517 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822628485529 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828368280611 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146556678987 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915781592045 0.0580467560999 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.