Increase the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
Nowadays, air pollution and greenhouse gas emission are increasing, so some people think the cost of petrol should be increased to solve the traffic and pollution problems. In my opinion, improving public transport is another effective solution to these problems.
It is believed that increasing petrol’ price is the best way because if its price were higher, people would consider using private transportation when they go out. However, increasing the cost of petrol may cause to the development in the price of others. Therefore, when petrol’ cost increase, stuffs become more expensive, so human’ life would be worse. That results in many other problems in society.
Meanwhile, developing public transport systems make people more interested in using it. For instance, in my town, the bus system was improved so there are more people take the bus rather than before. It contributes to decline the greenhouse gas emission and the number of vehicles. Moreover, the development of a country depends on its finance, technology, military and transport systems. Transportation plays an important role in delivering goods and passengers, so the nation improves the transport systems, which can earn a large amount of money. However, the disadvantage of this solution is it takes a big financial capital to develop the transport system.
In conclusion, both solutions have advantages and disadvantages. As for me, I believe improving public transport is a more effective way because it doesn’t cause to other problems and it has more meanings to national development
- The table below gives the information about the underground railway systems in 6 countries
- The table below gives the information about the underground railway systems in 6 countries
- Increase the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems To what extent do you agree or disagree What other measures do you think might be effective 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44308943089 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98596813185 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589430894309 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4196086202 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6428571429 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136298358985 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484960090252 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591692258245 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10216859877 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693621419376 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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