Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
It is true that higher prize of gasoline is the best choice to decrease the traffic problems and the air pollution question. In my opinion, this is a one of the effective ways to solve the problems, but not the only way and I would encourage other ways to solve the staining problems.
Our environment suffer from terrible pollution problems and crowded traffic block which improve the gasoline cost can solve these problems in some degree. Firstly, higher petrol expense will effect people consider whether they should choose car to drive which can encourage citizen choose to use public traffic tools, such as bus, underground and so on. Secondly, decreasing user of car, the use of petrol is also decline that less CO2 let out in our environment which will protect our surroundings. Finally, with the increasing expensive price of petrol, many production factories will development some new energy traffic tools which will reduce pollution and improve the environmental awareness of people.
Certainly, there are many other measures also will be effective to solve these problems. On one hand, government such as transport agency which can release policy that when people use public traffic tools for the degree of times, they can get the account in the cost of public traffic instruments. On the other hand, government should encourage some transportation factories to develop the new energies tools and encourage people to buy this products instead of energy-consuming pollution products. These two methods might be the effective way to figure out the problems.
In conclusion, it is important to control the gasoline prize to change people attitude in traffic and environmental problems, but it is also important to use other methods to solve these problems.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ee. Firstly, higher petrol expense will effect people consider whether they should cho...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'declined'.
Suggestion: declined
... user of car, the use of petrol is also decline that less CO2 let out in our environmen...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rgies tools and encourage people to buy this products instead of energy-consuming po...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22456140351 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76602969672 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494736842105 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0549438306 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.363636364 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19393649413 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883397667074 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047610689637 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126953328575 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048740669675 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ee. Firstly, higher petrol expense will effect people consider whether they should cho...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'declined'.
Suggestion: declined
... user of car, the use of petrol is also decline that less CO2 let out in our environmen...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rgies tools and encourage people to buy this products instead of energy-consuming po...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22456140351 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76602969672 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494736842105 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0549438306 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.363636364 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19393649413 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883397667074 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047610689637 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126953328575 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048740669675 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.