Parents have a great influence in the lives of their children.They monitor the activities of their children and make amendments or corrections to make their life better. One such way of ensuring this is by enforcing strict rules and regulations. Although many people are against this approach, in my opinion, parents should use strict rules and regulations if they want their children to be successful. This is because rules help in maintaining discipline, prevent their children from swaying into the wrong path and they also help in studies.
First, strict rules help in maintaining discipline in...
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a child gets into the influence some bad children which eventually takes that child away from studies.
a child gets into the influence by some bad children, which eventually takes that child away from studies.
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