Many efforts has been made by countries to address challenges concerning the environment but the situation has not improved.
.What are the possible reasons for environment degradattion? are there any solution to combat ?
Undoubtedly, the delicacy of environment is still being disturbed despite of the ample attempts which have been taken by nations to ameliorate the scenario. This essay asserts that the possible cause behind the menace is irrational behavior of the mankind which could be rectified through the enactment of stringent laws.
Seemingly, never ending aspirations provoke individuals to abandon the social obligations towards the natural surroundings. Owing to their careless and lethargic attitude, untoward circumstances are being inflicted by them which have become inevitable. The hoard of materialistic possessions at the cost of atmosphere has becoming the emerging trend. It would be biased to overlook the data published by World Health Organisation stating that in bygone year China has the highest industrial output in the world along with the exaggerated bar of air pollution. Moreover, heedless of lifestyle is on the top of every driving factor.
Even though efficient approaches are being employed by authorities, widespread implementation of strict legislation would be an impeccable option to curb the hassle. Reason behind this is that hefty penalities for violation of rules will certainly instill the fear in the minds of wrong doers. Furthermore, there is need to create awareness among denizens through campaigns. To exemplify, in new guidelines issued by UNEP,every country should emphasis on eco-friendly practices by aiming to alleviate the level of pollution approximately 10%.
To conclude, the joint hands of populace and statutory bodies can bring the drastic chnages for the welfare of surroundings and to conserve the quality of it for morrow generattion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63529411765 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08195377349 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678431372549 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2936271498 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.75 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0721590209109 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209420124959 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289988895436 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0429206958384 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276701692796 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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