In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour , while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Undoubtedly, children are the tender buds of society and how they should be raised has always been a concernable issue across the globe. Although some eminent countries have access to the moon but in a great dilemma that to what extented liberty should be granted to youngsters. This essay asserts that regulations must be follwed by children in their formative years to a greater extend for comprehensive development along with meagre amount of liberation.
Even tough ample qualities are mandatory to constitute a good character but top of that well excercised discipline in lifestyle is accountable for success. Under strict supervision young minds are exposed to an advanced level of etiquettes that ultimately endow them with demanded personality traits which are the required to prevail in pruralistic society. To exemplify that as per the research of World Health Organisation in the time of pandemic 'Covid-19' Japan was the least infected country beside with the third largest population because children are being taught regarding social behaviour in strict conditions exact from their tender days.
Furthermore, bestowing freedom in prudently designed structure to a child is an impeccable measure for holistic growth without inflicting the level of critical thinking. Seemingly, immature minds are tend to be nurtured in barrier-free environment which turn them in responsible citizens which is conductive to take rational decisions independently. This process of learning endow toddlers with enough self-sufficient energy to channlize it in some constructive purposes. It would be biased to overlook the data published by Unesco stating children who are being raised in sever circumstances are less confident.
To conclude, the hybird combination of both provide assistance in maintaining the delegacy of children's behaviour. Therefore,adequate essence of freedom should not be absent and imposing some restrictions are necessary for the sustainability of community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...thinking. Seemingly, immature minds are tend to be nurtured in barrier-free environm...
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Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to endow'
Suggestion: to endow
...independently. This process of learning endow toddlers with enough self-sufficient en...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , adequate
...legacy of childrens behaviour. Therefore,adequate essence of freedom should not be absent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69023569024 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17480744748 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659932659933 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0304680806 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.833333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169688816662 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571630895446 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594765395248 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101236436881 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629485627185 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.89 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.