many famous sports players advertise sports products. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?
Undoubtedly, markets are flooded with variety of produtcs and in such scenario to get acquainted the denizens with arrivals of new items through ads is the only impeccable measure. To serve this purpose, producers approach renouned players to play roles to prmote their articles as viwers are fond of well known personalities.This essay asserts that although given phenomenon can effect the performance of sportsperson, undeniably it is the another source of receipts for them.
Seemingly, players charge extravaggantly for such performances from producers becasue the tenure of their career life is short and temporary. This is because, retirements are designed at early stage of life therefore in order to maintain a stardum, high profile and even to sustain better lifestyle they look for distinct income patterns. Therefore, doing promotion is the plausible way to earn constant revenues. It would be biased to overlook the data published by International Sports Welfare Organisation stating that in bygone years more than 37% of retired cricket players across the world committed sucide due to the financial crisis which is certainly a great loss of human assets for any nation.
Even though, advertisement has become the ultimate marketing tool for enhancing the sale prmotions through contracting with renouned players but still this practice is accountable for detrioting their efficiency. Reason to this is that, in hoard of more monetary resources concerned sprotsmen are being wavered from main purpose of their utmost participation in games. Diverted attentions are having adverse impacts on achievements and inflicting the alleviation in productivity level. To exemplify, research of Tribune has shown that in last cricket world cup team of england faced a drastic failure because whole team was busy in promotional activities and snatched less time for preparations.
To conclude, this emerging trend is going to escalate in upcoming future but authorities should restrict it to some extent and take responsibilties to provide financial assistance along with better ameneties. Thus, players could emphasis adequately on their games to bring the name and fame for country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55223880597 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00629176124 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674626865672 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6614060424 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9166666667 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125300385661 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395472422633 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245949198034 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659329493717 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236834701839 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.96 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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