you have recently booked a Trip to Africa. Write a letter to the travel agency and ask for the membership
in their club.
In your letter explain in more details who are you, what information you exactly need, why, when and in what form
you need it the information.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am John, dweller of Huston Street U.S.A, penning down this epistle to get acquaint with itinerary of a trip to Africa that I have booked with your travel company.
Although I have read your information about the this trip on your advertisement brochure, I want to acquire the comprehensive knowledge about this tour. Firstly, I need the name and contact numbers of all those voyagers who would travel with me. I also excited to inquire about the hotel which you have booked for us, whether it is a half board or full board and list of place for excursions. It would be high appreciable if you apprise me with the list of local doctors available so that I could contact them in case of emergency.
kindly send me above the inquired details through email at least one week before the flight along with my original GST invoice and acknowledgement of payments. Please feel free to contact regarding any problem and i have enclosed my email address.
I am anticipating a prompt response from your side.
Yours sincerely,
JOhn
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...I am John, dweller of Huston Street U.S.A, penning down this epistle to get acqua...
^
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...ough I have read your information about the this trip on your advertisement brochure, I ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Kindly
...d contact them in case of emergency. kindly send me above the inquired details thro...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...egarding any problem and i have enclosed my email address. I am anticipating a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81420765027 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63678048104 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672131147541 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4661581245 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8888888889 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179125140334 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636110739284 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375683751991 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833124129793 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657730381902 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.