you have borrowed some books from university library,but you have not returned
write a letter to the library official and in your letter describe what happened, express ypur
sincere words of apology and pffer what you can do to make it up.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Navdeep Puri, dweller of Huston Street U.S.A, currently pursuing a post graduation diploma in Finance & Taxation in your university. I am inscribing this letter to apologize about keeping the books beyond the due date.
Although I always respect all the rules and regulations of college, this time the situation is just out of control. Last week, when I was preparing for my final examination, suddenly I received a message that my grandfather was not well and hospitalized. I, immediately ran for hospital and by mistake, I carried borrowed books along with my luggage. Since my grand papa is in critical condition and there is nobody in my family to look after him, it is impossible for me to come to college and return the books.
I understand other students also need this book and deeply apologize for inconvenience. I assure you that I would not show such kind of recklessness again and return the books by the end of this month. Please do not revoke my library privileges and I am ready to bear all the fine you impose on me.
Thanks for your time and kind consideration.
Yours faithfully
Navdeep Puri.
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- we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Navdeep Puri, dwel...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...deep Puri, dweller of Huston Street U.S.A, currently pursuing a post graduation d...
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Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ease do not revoke my library privileges and I am ready to bear all the fine you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83838383838 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81333443357 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661616161616 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7978362301 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0909090909 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13224789654 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050380930333 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449471541085 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765762055209 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595707691101 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.