People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.

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not only more enjoying and but also upcoming events.
not only more enjoyments but also more upcoming events.

but she always want to be a teacher
but she always wants to be a teacher

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Score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 326 350
No. of Characters: 1432 1500
No. of Different Words: 181 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.249 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.393 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.115 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.399 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.271 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.49 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.159 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5