While it is sometimes thought that prison is the best place for criminals, others believe that there are better ways to deal with them. What is your opinion?
Some opine that criminals should be kept in the prison as they are the best place for them, rather others are of the view that there more effective ways to reform them. In my opinion, criminals who are a potential threat to society should be locked inside the jails whereas those with the desire to transform themselves should be allowed a chance to get involved in reformatory work.
To begin with, the serious offenders who have convicted horrendous crime undoubtedly possess the ability to harm society so they should be confined to lockups. The criminal motive and intentions they have cannot be dealt with by peaceful measures which means that they will re-offend and wreak havoc in the society if they are allowed to move out of the prison. Even if they are prevented from committing any crime they might influence young and needy minds to follow their footsteps and thus augment the crime rate. In the end, no fruitful result can be generated in the process.
However, the juvenile offenders and minor criminals who have been jailed for comparatively minor offences should be allowed a second chance to redesign their lives. They should be granted an opportunity to correct themselves. First of all, vocational training programs should be started for juvenile offenders and moral education should be given to teach them to distinguish noble from evil, become law-abiding citizens of the country. Secondly, adults should be given vocational training and skill development sessions that can help them in grabbing a good job after release from the rehabilitation centers and stay immune to criminal tendencies.
To conclude, it is not realistic ti make and follow the general rule for all the criminals. Before determining whether a criminal should be put behind the bars or given any opportunity to reform the gravity of the crime committed should be analyzed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07467532468 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63854389726 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574675324675 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8348448785 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130999268749 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563946564903 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768290728483 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954219344721 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772768093516 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.