One of the most foremost purposes of businesses is making a profit helping the development of the companies. However, the social obligation activity of business organizations has been a great deal of public attention. I believe that it is important that companies should do more society than simply making money.
On the one hand, by creating profit, businesses can be able to exist and develop in a competitive market. It is true that only in this way can companies have enough money to pay for all of the running costs, such as employees’ wages and payment for buildings and utilities. Moreover, making money is such a very vital element that helps businesses improve the quality of human and material resources like devices, infrastructures, employees which contribute success and more development of businesses. Therefore, if companies have good financial health, it should make a positive contribution to society.
On the other hand, companies not only run with the sole aim of maximizing profit but also should take care of the obligations of society. This means what owners companies should do is making ort to create the best conditions for their employees such as pay a living wage to ensure that workers have a good quality of life instead of making the most of their labor. Besides, companies should take part in many more social activities that show obligations as well as promote companies, such as doing charity, funding for educational institutions or protecting the environment. Also, paying taxes honestly is a good responsibility that company bosses need to do instead of trying to minimize their tax payment.
In conclusion, companies should have as many social obligations as they effort to make profit objectives.
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- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... companies have enough money to pay for all of the running costs, such as employees’ wages...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, honestly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17730496454 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95218676064 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7775563144 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254828294473 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970397394905 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331279008712 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165953544946 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266308685548 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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