Growing up alone without parent’s care is extremely harsh - If not impossible. There are two sides to thoughts. Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about right and wrong. Other people consider that the main responsibility of parents is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up. Both of these ideas have their own arguments.
There is no denying that parents are the first and the only person who has to discipline and teaches children how to distinguish from right and wrong effectively. When the children just were born, parents directly give them feelings of first life. In particular, parents use words, actions, gestures, and eyes to show their attitudes and teach children the first lesson. This is a reason why children can acknowledge and react even while they are no awareness and undeveloped communication ability. For example, when a child crying loudly asks to eat candy, his parents think it is unreasonable and they express this by staring at him. Otherwise, when a child learns how to wash his hand, his parents blessing displays by smiling or clapping their hands. It is not always thought essential that the teachers are the first person who trains children’s personalitíe. Because in the fact that the parents are the ones that the children have more contact.
Another aspect is equally important that the foremost responsibility of parents is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up. To be honest, children are the products of both parents and family. They are strongly influenced by the personality, words, and actions of parents and family members. This impacts not only the family’s way of education but also the lifestyle. In general, parents will always give their children the best conditions to grow. By all means, they want to give their own children the best things possible. More than anyone, they always hope their children are developing most comprehensively and safely. These things are not really responsibilities but also arise from the sacred affection between parents and children.
As can be seen, what parents give their children not only the responsibilities of training and teaching is not just about raising and creating a living environment but also their whole life. Parent’s hearts are really lofty so please love their parents while we can.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...son who trains children’s personalitíe. Because in the fact that the parents are the on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, while, as to, for example, in general, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09798994975 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75767589682 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497487437186 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.351394272 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2173913043 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3043478261 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73913043478 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.601872254174 0.244688304435 246% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182469474995 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196285153344 0.0667982634062 294% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.420005308366 0.151304729494 278% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.213699219575 0.056905535591 376% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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