You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
When some people are famous and they used to post everything about his life in a social media like Instagram, Facebook or something like that. It is hard for the person who are famous to have a quiet life nowadays that everyone like to give their opinion and start to judge others. Moreover, it is boring when everything that you want to do is harder when you are famous and always have some people looking to you and judging you even when you go to the beach with your family and the journalists is always taking photo when you want just relax and enjoy the beach with your family.
Sometimes famous people are treated unfairly by the media but it is not always like that. It depends in which situation you are living and why people is saying this bad thing about their life. However, I believe that is the price when you are famous and you used to give space for everyone watch your life when you are recording everything that you are doing in your life on a social media.
In my opinion people who are famous should have a private life because they are human like us and everyone need to have some time and space to relax, to think about their life. Sometimes fans are inconvenient when they want to know everything about the life of the person who they like and the most of the problems about the relationship between the fan and the famous person is when the fan are disrespectful and start to invade their personal life making it annoying.
In conclusion, the life of famous people are hard but it is the price of their fame.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 385, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'medium'?
Suggestion: medium
... you are doing in your life on a social media. In my opinion people who are famou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41901408451 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16173956178 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408450704225 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.6861488934 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.444444444 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278733415718 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15469086868 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575221225706 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217709366948 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465095826376 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.