You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, there is a debate on how media interfear celebrity personal life. some people argue that, paparazzi are doing beyond their limit for their trp, while other says, being a wel-known person commom people must know everything about their life. In this essay, we will discuss on both point of view.
Firstly, media are capturing everything about renowned person and showing to people withour their permission. They also modify the news with sizziling headlines, so they can attract customers without thinking their privacy. Media must know that even the famous people are also anormal person from our society. They also have rights to live their life as commonly, not always surrounded by cameras. For example, so many times we have seen their babies are felling uncomfertable or cying due to camra flash light. In this world, there are many issues people are facing whihc need to be news but, paparazi want to make news of without makeup faces, dressup, airport looks which is totally unfair.
On the other hand, a person become renowned because of common people so, they have rights to know everything about their favourite person. poeple are always inspired by their favourite celebrity and want to follow their path. They think that, if they can intimate their looks, dress, fashion, style they can be like them and media is the only way they can news all about. Without common people, famous people cannot keep their fame. For instance, Due to the irresponsble behaviour towars the fans, many of the celebrity had experienced downfall in their career.
In conclusion, there are both pons and cons of being celebrity. Through the media they have to make feel their fans they are with you but, media also must respect their privacy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
...edia interfear celebrity personal life. some people argue that, paparazzi are doing ...
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Suggestion:
...ust know that even the famous people are also anormal person from our society. Th...
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Suggestion: Poeple
...verything about their favourite person. poeple are always inspired by their favourite ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'there are both (pons)'?
Suggestion: there are both (pons)
...all in their career. In conclusion, there are both pons and cons of being celebrity. Through th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01374570447 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22588649372 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2067177234 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304955441165 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109020381243 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469207727315 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211410403592 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243527370963 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.