The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000
The bar chart illustrates the changing pattern of vehicles used in travel to work and back to home in European city, from 1960 to 2000.
Overall, the chart shows the use of car in European cities, were increased by dramatically throughout the period, while and others fell.
To begin with, the use of car as a main means of transport in Europe was just above 5% in 1960, which was the most least among all others, but the car increase steadily and strongly, reached about 37% in 2000, which is considered as a highest transport service used by European.
Over the same period, walking was the most favorite means of travelling in 1960, at approximately 35%, fell to 10% by 2000. However, bike was the second preferred transport to go around by European in 1960, and the figure was recorded roughly 27%, by the time it decreased and end with 8% in 2000, as least demanded means of vehicle.
Moreover, the figure of bus was erratic and popularity was 20% in 1960 for European, while the demand fell in 2000 with 17%, after reaching peak at 27% in 1980.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'least' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: least
...as just above 5% in 1960, which was the most least among all others, but the car increase ...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...out 37% in 2000, which is considered as a highest transport service used by Europ...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 1960, at approximately 35%, fell to 10% by 2000. However, bike was the second pr...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, second, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63492063492 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45267630625 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582010582011 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3159481388 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30301145478 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164885128125 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972551499864 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183555343513 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983585313061 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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