Many people join distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does
Distance learning ia becaming extremly popular now adays as internet service had spreaded its range. In this internet era, it had attracted high number of students in distance learning. Despite, the boom in home based learning it can not be beneficial as much as attending colleges or universities,as far as i am concerned.
to begain with, universities educations are not limited in some text book as they are always concern with enlightened students in favourable enviroment and focus on making them practically perfect like, learning about our culture , how to interact with each other and how to face real life challanges. They educated their students how to deal in real life problems by sharing their own experienced , history and educating as their capacity to deal in their proffesional life. Some printed papers, notes and some videos cannot make the students capable in real life. For intense, if people learn from online class they can even pass with good marks but it is difficult to impliment the knowledge in proffessional life.Universities teach not only to pass the paper exam they educate the people to deal in real world in different environments.
Secondly, the professor shared their knowledge, tricks and new idea in teaching method so the students achieve higher degree . Every students have different capacity not all are same minded, many technices and tricks must be used to make education suitable for everone. But by learning 1/2 video students cannot get all these new ideas and shared experienced and it is not productive for everyone because, it take every level of studenta in same basket. Learning online guiter or music class , cooking class are the perfect example , as some can get then knowledge but they cannot go higher with that due to lack of tricks and productivity.
To conclusion, online class can be bonus point for those who have sharp brain but it cannot replace the universities and cannot motivate the students. So, attending college or universities is always benefit then attending diatance- learning .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17117117117 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80135675261 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2740241203 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.461538462 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178274041701 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712572170073 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502859675436 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118152120495 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391940760238 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.