Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take ti to tackle the issue?
Moving towards the 21st century, a large number of people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern about the urgent environmental issues. It is widely believed that global warming poses a serious threat to people’s health and the wildlife habitats. As far as I am concerned, there has been a highly problematic issue, and this raises the question in related to its causes and the possible solutions. Therefore, some major points will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are two main reasons are causing the issue of rising the earth’s average temperature. First of all, it is a well-documented fact that the levels of greenhouse gases released from power plants are increasing at the alarming rates. Consequently, this leads to the growth of carbon dioxide which can cause the greenhouse effect and global warming. Furthermore, there is no doubt that deforestation is seen to be another reason causing the rising of global temperature. For instance, trees help absorb carbon dioxide and thus reduce climate change. However, due to forest clearance for different purposes, carbon dioxide and other emissions will continue to rise, contributing to global warming.
To tackle the above problems, several solutions could be taken into consideration. First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that eco-friendly energy sources should be encouraged to be used more such as renewable energy or nuclear instead of fossil fuels. Moreover, there is no denying that stricter punishments should be imposed to prevent illegal logging. Finally, people can inevitably help prevent global warming by planting more trees or taking part in environmental programmes.
All things considered, global warming is the quintessential problem of our time. Accordingly, I highly recommend that the governments should raise people’s awareness in terms of this current issue and promote more public campaigns. If this recommendation is carried out, the comprehensive development of our future generations will be ensured.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Moving towards the 21st century, a large number of people are nowadays expressing a deeply...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, no doubt, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53993610224 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02505132188 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623003194888 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8812147853 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181111839612 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553227358676 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597383678228 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993299383987 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154838716072 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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