Q:-Your local museum has asked for feedback on your recent visit . write to museum tell them
what you liked or disliked
make som esugeestion for improvement
describe some other exhibits you would like to see
Dear Sir or Madam,
Warm regards! My name is Samvedna Puri and I am inscribing this piece of epistle to provide you feedback in respect of my recent visit to the 'Maharaja Ranjit Singh' local museum. Appaerantly, top of everything maintaince of the place was commendable but the lack of security around the historical monuments was the matter of concern which i did not appreciate.
Since the museum contains ancient and worthy material, therefore unauthorised access to touch such things by local public should be supervised by guards all the time. Otherwise, upcoming visitors would not able to have quick glimpes of golden time.
Even though this magestic building represent a mini punjab, it would be great if the maps could be arranged in geographical section so viewers could enhance their knowledge regarding the boundries of state.
I hope you will consider my viewpoint for further improvements.
Yours faithfully,
Samvedna Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...numents was the matter of concern which i did not appreciate. Since the museum...
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Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. Yours faithfully, Samvedna Puri.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3178807947 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8137825156 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.761589403974 0.622605031667 122% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2046918616 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151169642624 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633278068004 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495295280018 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753031690402 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412672596097 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 7.59969072165 134% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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