Question: As you have had a long break and been free from school due to the worldwide spread of a new fatal disease, you may have a chance to reflect on many diferent things in life. What do you think are the positive and negative aspects found/revealed in/by this mishap?
Write your answer in the form of an Advantage-Disadvantage essay.
In the first two months of 2020 Corona virus poses many difficulties for our country. The education also suffered serious. However it is also a chance for all of us to think about the positive and negative aspects in our life.
These are positive values that we can see through the epidemic. First, Covid-19 has accentuated solidarity of our country. People have acted in a very responsible way to the surrounding. Everyone encouraged each other to overcome this disease. We have seen many masks that organizations give free to everyone. Second, another thing that in highly appreciated is the awareness of Vietnamese people. Everybody is well aware of the danger of the disease. People gradually form the habit of wearing masks when going out or washing their hands,etc. Finally, Corona epidemic is a testament to the government's ability. So far, Vietnam has controlled the disease strictly.
In contrast, there are some drawbacks that make us have to ponder. First of all, there are many people spreading false information that confused people's psychology. Many individuals are selfish and have no common sense with the community. They are afraid of trouble and don't accept isolation. Another downside is behaving immorally to fellow citizens. Many individuals seek to do business and get rich from the fear of others. It's about masks which have been increased prices. Last but not least, the failure of a part of those directly responsible for Corona pandemic when putting the value of human life at its utmost importance. In the beginning, they chose to hide the fact. Eventually, that leads to serious consequences as we can see.
To sum up, every situation also has two sides for us to observe.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In the first two months of 2020 Corona virus poses ma...
^^
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...y. The education also suffered serious. However it is also a chance for all of us to th...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r to overcome this disease. We have seen many masks that organizations give free ...
^^
Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...ks when going out or washing their hands,etc. Finally, Corona epidemic is a testamen...
^^^^
Line 3, column 592, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
..., Corona epidemic is a testament to the governments ability. So far, Vietnam has controlled...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...mmunity. They are afraid of trouble and dont accept isolation. Another downside is b...
^^^^
Line 4, column 427, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...s and get rich from the fear of others. Its about masks which have been increased p...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, well, another thing, in contrast, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 282.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06382978723 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72880116848 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 106.607317073 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631205673759 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 283.868780488 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 8.94146341463 268% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8915373209 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.5 112.824112599 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.75 22.9334400587 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.54166666667 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149917886752 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348061553987 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430629223515 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755011725538 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455873590098 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.88 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 40.7170731707 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In the first two months of 2020 Corona virus poses ma...
^^
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...y. The education also suffered serious. However it is also a chance for all of us to th...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r to overcome this disease. We have seen many masks that organizations give free ...
^^
Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...ks when going out or washing their hands,etc. Finally, Corona epidemic is a testamen...
^^^^
Line 3, column 592, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
..., Corona epidemic is a testament to the governments ability. So far, Vietnam has controlled...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...mmunity. They are afraid of trouble and dont accept isolation. Another downside is b...
^^^^
Line 4, column 427, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...s and get rich from the fear of others. Its about masks which have been increased p...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, well, another thing, in contrast, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 282.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06382978723 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72880116848 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 106.607317073 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631205673759 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 283.868780488 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 8.94146341463 268% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8915373209 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.5 112.824112599 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.75 22.9334400587 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.54166666667 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149917886752 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348061553987 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430629223515 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755011725538 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455873590098 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.88 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 40.7170731707 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.