Many people are involved in sports when they are young but stop once they are adults why do many adults stop doing physical exercise? what can be done about this problem?
Some people were linked with sports when they were youngsters. However, most people leave sports activities after achieving the state of maturity because of a shortage of time and love for dear ones in time of professional life. Likely, these are the reasons leading to this, the some solution should be considered to alleviate it.
To begin with, in contemporary times, you usually mature people do not have much time for physical activities in the professional world. Almost every professional worker wants to attain their targets to become successful in their career. Since pressure of achieving goals makes an individual highly occupied in their work, this results in a shortage of time for games. For example, research shows that due to a restless schedule in a busy lifestyle, people are unable to give time to physical sports. This leads to health complications at an early age.
Furthermore, grown ups want to spend valuable time from a hectic schedule with their families or friends at home. This time they mainly spend on indoor activities such as playing video games with children or organising social gatherings with their friends. Consequently, these may be the causes where mature people could not divert their time towards outdoor games.
Although, these challenges are a matter of concern nevertheless, there are remedial measures for this problem. Firstly, companies should initiate fitness camps on a weekly basis or establish sports halls for workers at workplaces where they can spend time for physical games. Though, some multinational enterprises have their own playgrounds or gyms, where their employees can give appropriate time for physical wellness. Secondly, employers and schools disseminate awareness among their employees and students about the significance of outdoor games and disadvantages of indoor games which negatively affect their health.
These types of efforts might promote adults to play outdoor games and information about detrimental effects of sedentary lifestyle.
Overall, it seems advisable that professional work load and affection towards dear ones in the globalised world seems to refrain individuals from outdoor sports. Apart from this, these problems could be solved with the joint cooperative efforts of companies and workers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50141643059 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7591631713 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57223796034 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3478743664 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.888888889 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140134213573 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480839843338 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354067579419 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751983227384 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245536465532 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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