Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many parents are in a quandary over whether to encourage their children to take part-time job is a good way to prepare them for adult life or not. While some parents hold the opposite view in term of taking part-time job by children, due to the undeniable fact that it increases the pressure and stress on them, from my vantage point, its advantages outweigh the drawbacks. I would like to address some conspicuous aspects to corroborate my viewpoint.
The most compelling point is that taking part-time job makes the children ready for their future career. When they take a vocation at the first s...
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taking job is rather wise decision
taking job is rather a wise decision
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