Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both views, give your own opinion and include examples from your experience.
it is a fact that most people are beginning to do their jobs at home, thanks to the development of technology. whilst, they used to take a trip to their workplace in the past. In this essay, I will take over the pros and cons of this new trend.
On the one hand, it is clear that I would bring about several plus points. First, working from home saves the huge amount of money which are spended on filling up. A research conducted by Havard university has found that over 70 percents of population prefers going to their workplace by public transportations than going on foot because it is faster and more convenient. Second, the enviroment has been getting better since employers stopped working at their offices. According to the latest report from Colorado Boulder university (USA), the hole in ozon layer is starting to recover itself in Antarctica after absorbing too much emission from manufacturing and vehicles at the time before the corona pandemic arised.
On the other hand, I believe that this trend also has a lots of major negatives aspects. The most significant disadvantages is that using electronic devices such as computer and the internet, makes people have a sedentary lifestyle. In other words, if they worked from home, there would be taken more time to sitting in front of the screen than in the office, due to they would not need to work follow the time schedule in their company. Another reason that this development would be disadvantageous is that it would cause the global economic go down. Among the blockdown cause by the COVID-19 outbreaks, the needs of travelling has rapidly decreases as people don’t allow to go to crowded places including the offices. Consequenly, the price of petrol has fall to the negative numbers. this would devastate many countries economically that rely on fuel as a source of income.
In conclusion, as can been seen from the points made in this essay, there are both advantages and disadvantages to working from home. whilst, there are many advantages to this, a significant negative impact would be the collapse of global economic. if managed in in the right way, consequently, I feel that overall the advantages would outweight the disadvantages.
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- Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits while others believe the opposite Discuss both views give your own opinion and include examples from your experience 11
- In the past most people used to travel to their place of work With increased use of computers the internet and smartphones more and more people are starting to work from home What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, second, so, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76017300289 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553475935829 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1534121133 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.944444444 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0727424972785 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0217623286924 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270441240017 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0416540213308 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204903665844 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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