Some believe that the best way to stay fit is to join a gym or health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the change in time people have become more aware of fitness and health hence, some reckon that one should join the gym or health club in order to be fit rather others are of the opinion that one regularly activities such as a walk or climb stairs are sufficient to retain health goal. In my opinion, walking and stair climbing is enough for maintaining good health. This essay will discuss both the above-mentioned viewpoints in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, fitness centers or gyms are basically for the people who are more conscious about their body and figure as they are mostly inspired by either by any model or athlete. There are trainers who help them in achieving their particular goals and also guide them for the adequate diet they need to intake. Furthermore, as the training in the gyms is paid hence, people are more serious about exercising there in order to get worth of their money. For instance, in the survey done by IIT College in India around 78 percent of the population of the metropolitan cities is health club members.
On the flip side, in order to stay fit and healthy, one need not do such a hard work unlike in gyms every day. Activities such as walking to the bus stop or taking stairs instead of lifts to reach the office can definitely help in losing the weight and stay in shape. Moreover, walking and stair climbing help to control the cholesterol level and blood present of the people without paying any penny. For instance, a survey done by medical practitioners about 87 percent of doctors recommend walking to their patients just to control their diseases.
To conclude, fitness is necessary either one can join a gym or any health club but in my opinion, joining any fitness club is not mandatory, regular walking and climbing stairs can also help to stay healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72413793103 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47438901478 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514106583072 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7145231758 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.583333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312911950436 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111361046914 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963367439438 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210573910854 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112964705833 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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