Many people think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but some people believe there are other external factors that influence us. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
being happy is key to success and it's in our hands to be joys, as majority crowd thinks we on our own held responsible for the same. However, some individuals have different opine and believe not only the individual alone but also the environment and other factors equally responsible for deciding the happiness we experience. I am in strong consideration that the external factor plays an important role in one's happiness.
For a person what is happiness? it is a state of mind which relieves him from stress and anxiety. To achieve this state of mind human beings must have the ability to control their emotion. To do so there are various ways that help to concur such as Yogas, meditation, exercise. these all teach to overpower self emotions to achieve a state of happiness. if we think positively we find happiness in everything around and it is derived by inner satisfaction.
while some individuals consider external factors to affect their happiness. Every person has one or the other dream to fulfill such as a good job, big house, luxurious cars. A feeling of satisfaction arrives when all these get achieved. For some great deal while shopping makes them happy. weather plays an important role in it. To exemplify, a nice and pleasant weather light up the mood feels joyful. On the other hand, Extreme hot or cold weather makes the person tired.
In conclusion, although many people think that happiness can be solely achieved without considering other factors, it cannot be denied that a person cannot be happy if externally everything is going against his expectations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98127340824 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73349231742 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7561547885 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2352941176 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257047509497 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668205165633 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726620094089 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144931187592 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587801277671 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.