Crime is a problem all over the world and there is nothing that can be done to prevent it.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Crime is a world wide delimma. Infact it is an undeniable reality that it is rising locally as well as internationally. There are no preventing measures yet to make sure our safety .while in my opinion it is not the matter of few days motion to do a crime ,it took ages to become a criminal and engage themselves in this illegal activity.
From preceding years to till now it is increasing dramatically.it had different prospectives how people involve in this awful activity.From recent study it is found that 70 percent crimes are due to lack of distribution of money in a different societies.
More importantly, it is said where there is craving of bread and money,this is due to increase in population and lack of resources.sometimes adults forcefully pull from in this activity from different criminal agencies, in reward of handsome money.often it seems that adults get enraged towards their family restrictions they join these criminal groups. Moreover financially and emotionally they attract in this vulnerable act.
With the passage of time we are unable to overcome this phenomenon as govt and police took steps to resolve this problem the criminal generate new ideas to crime.In my opinion govt should design a standard outline after categorizing the crimes and set hard and fast punishments ,Furthermore supply of weapons also b distracted tis could help to resolve this problm.Its nit just a fact of a country it is world wide so we should work in unity not apart .Because together is unity ,division is weakness.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-06-21 | mihir76 | 56 | view |
| 2022-09-29 | vishal sachdeva | 61 | view |
| 2022-09-10 | Nguyễn Ngọc Phương Vy | 56 | view |
| 2022-07-09 | lanhhoang | 73 | view |
| 2022-01-19 | phg_phg | 95 | view |
- Crime is a problem all over the world and there is nothing that can be done to prevent it To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind such as reading and doing word puzzles Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time 56
- Some people say that self employment is better than working for a company or institutions Discuss both point of view what is your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
Crime is a world wide delimma. Infact it is an undeniable rea...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
Crime is a world wide delimma. Infact it is an undeniable rea...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ing measures yet to make sure our safety .while in my opinion it is not the matter...
^^
Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... matter of few days motion to do a crime ,it took ages to become a criminal and en...
^^
Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: From
...w people involve in this awful activity.From recent study it is found that 70 percen...
^^^^
Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'society'?
Suggestion: society
...of distribution of money in a different societies. More importantly, it is said where ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...here there is craving of bread and money,this is due to increase in population and la...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es.sometimes adults forcefully pull from in this activity from different crimina...
^^
Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s forcefully pull from in this activity from different criminal agencies, in rew...
^^
Line 4, column 357, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ctions they join these criminal groups. Moreover financially and emotionally they attrac...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...he criminal generate new ideas to crime.In my opinion govt should design a standar...
^^
Line 6, column 278, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...crimes and set hard and fast punishments ,Furthermore supply of weapons also b dis...
^^
Line 6, column 366, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Its
...d tis could help to resolve this problm.Its nit just a fact of a country it is worl...
^^^
Line 6, column 405, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
....Its nit just a fact of a country it is world wide so we should work in unity not apart .B...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 405, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
....Its nit just a fact of a country it is world wide so we should work in unity not apart .B...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 452, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ide so we should work in unity not apart .Because together is unity ,division is w...
^^
Line 6, column 454, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...e so we should work in unity not apart .Because together is unity ,division is weakness...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 479, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ity not apart .Because together is unity ,division is weakness.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03137254902 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08052632601 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.396678128 49.4020404114 319% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.285714286 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4285714286 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4285714286 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0791670198594 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444923217876 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522392583165 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480740603817 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418037595771 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.