You have just spend a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you have left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend, In your letter
Thank your friend for the holiday.
explain that you left your wallet in their house.
give them instructions of how to send it back to you.
Dear Bob,
I was just printing our pictures of the holiday we spend together, what an amazing time we had, I hope we can do this more often. I wanted to thank you for such an unforgettable time we spend on this vacation.
However, I realized yesterday that I forgot my wallet in your guest bedroom, it is in the side table drawer. I was in such a hurry as you remember my cab was already waiting down and I had to take my flight. Next time I will hopefully schedule my journey a day after we complete our trip. Anyways the wallet has all my cards and even the spare car keys, please if you can courier it to my address as soon as possible
.
Please as you know how important information is in my wallet please do the courier yourself.
Take care.
Dan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...er it to my address as soon as possible . I have a friend in the courier servic...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wallet please do the courier yourself. Take care.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, however, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39772727273 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43675139262 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630681818182 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.531125163 44.8134815571 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.0 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 16.8248392259 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244186942213 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925147905797 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696411775337 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16121166252 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229585774813 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.