Some people use social media to keep in touch with other and news events.
Do you think advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people consider using social media platforms to keep connected to others and for news. In my opinion, I believe that using social media to keep in touch with friends or others and relying on it for news can be harmful in the long run than the advantages it may provide.
Admittedly, some people think that social media is the best way to get connected to people and even to get updated about the news events as it is convenient and easily accessible. In other words, as the technology is improving day by day it makes our life easier with just one click, so most of the people can get connected to their friends, colleagues and others, just from the convenience of their own home, not only this, they can catch up quickly with the news updates as well. Moreover, the social media platforms such as Facebook, LinkedIn has provided easy opportunities to everyone to get connected and these sites even personalize the news according to the persons previous searches, thus people tend to use social media for news more often than the news channels.
Nevertheless, despite of these advantages, mentioned above, people who use social media to get connected to the people and even for news become an easy prey to the criminals. Using these sites puts a person’s private data at stake as it can be easily accessed by other people who can hack these sites and leak the information for their personal benefits. People also use them for catching up on news updates but can get into the trap of fake news , which has now become common nowadays, thus, leading to wrong information and many a times to many disputes.
In conclusion, communications and news on social media sites can be misleading and can pose a threat of leakage of personal data that can be used by criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71382636656 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55662370839 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498392282958 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5214506403 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.888888889 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5555555556 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5555555556 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345648667959 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179022502819 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936447633553 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232866109756 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115847870612 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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