A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past.
Write a reply to your friend. In your letter:
Tell your friend you understand the problem.
Explain what happened to you in the past.
Suggest possible solutions to the problem.
Dear John,
I’m writing this letter to try and solve your issue at work, I remember that I had to go through the same situation at my work place.
I completely understand what you might be going through because I was in the same shoes four months ago. I just want to assure you that this too will pass and you will be fine. I will try my best to sort out your problem.
I had lost my office laptop which had the all the project information of my work while travelling home. I had to submit a report of my work and presentation was due the coming week. I was almost done with my work but had not saved it. This could have cost me my job and my career was in jeopardy.
The first thing you ought to do is to file a police complaint so that they will be able to trace your laptop, in my case it really worked as they were very efficient. Meanwhile you should start again collected the data from your colleagues and start working on your project so that at least the work is not hindered from your side.
Best Wishes,
Donna.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I’m writing this letter to try and solve y...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I’m writing this letter to try and solve your issu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I’m writing this letter to try and solve your issue at work, I ...
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Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ar John, I’m writing this letter to try and solve your issue at work, I remember t...
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Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting this letter to try and solve your issue at work, I remember that I had to ...
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Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...his too will pass and you will be fine. I will try my best to sort out your probl...
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Line 6, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y my best to sort out your problem. I had lost my office laptop which had the...
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Line 6, column 106, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ation of my work while travelling home. I had to submit a report of my work and p...
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Line 6, column 184, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d presentation was due the coming week. I was almost done with my work but had no...
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Line 8, column 169, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...ly worked as they were very efficient. Meanwhile you should start again collected the da...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, really, so, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14753346889 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7882727064 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3636363636 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253823941135 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930583225543 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644396109388 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162168896344 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672116708848 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.