Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing for example through cell phone tracking and security cameras. In many cases, the people being monitered are unaware that this is happening.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweight the disadvantages.
In today’s world, there is an increase in the use of new technology which monitors people through their cellphones and surveillance cameras. Most of the times people are even unaware of being monitored.
In my opinion, I believe that monitoring by the Government is far more advantageous than it’s detrimental effects. The surveillance keeps the public safe in public places by stopping any threat.
Firstly, the increase in surveillance through cameras has stopped a lot of threats that would otherwise have been unnoticed. As the cameras are being installed at public places, such as malls, streets, and even public gatherings has the advantage that every moment is tracked and is very effective deterrent for the criminals who tend to do opportunistic crimes in public places. Moreover, surveillance due to security cameras on the traffic light has effectively reduced accidents. In addition, to this people have started to be more conscious while driving.
Another, Main monitoring technology that has most often and easily used is the cell phone tracking. By using the data of travel activity and location has helped to solve a large number of crime mysteries. As a result of this the crimes, for instance, kidnaping has stopped and solved by tracking the criminal's cell phone by using the cell phone towers locations and thus, saving many precious lives. This providing a platform for the security agencies to stop the crime from happening.
In conclusion, I think that monitoring people without their knowledge provides a path to reduce crime and importantly helps in reducing threats.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29296875 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81618411052 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58984375 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0528210048 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.230769231 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347048774139 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106006880763 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604988054659 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160407381546 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833462560001 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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