Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent days many technologies are being used to supervise people’s activities. Many individuals are unsuspecting that they are being monitored by using these technologies such as mobile phone tracking and security cameras. The impending essay will discuss why the benefits of this technology development do in fact override the drawbacks.
In todays’ world technology development helps societies in many ways. Firstly, one of the best technology developments is observing the publics’ doings by using surveillance cameras. These surveillance cameras are widely used in traffic monitoring systems. Police departments can identify the theft vehicles and smuggling easily by tracking the number plates of vehicles by using these surveillance security cameras. In addition, these observation cameras are being used in many apartments, hospitals, and colleges to watch any unusual events are happening. Secondly, cellphone tracking technology assists the police departments to save children and women from kidnappers and thieves. For example, the Kavalan app has been introduced by the Chennai police department to track the victims. The app is being installed and used by many female students and working women.
In many situations, citizens are unknowing that they are being watched by security cameras or by cellular phone tracing technology. To begin with, some fellows feel that monitoring persons without their knowledge are ethically wrong. These days many people have affected personally by the camera recordings. Furthermore, some folks use cellphone tracking technology to monitor others’ personal life. In a recent news article, a 26 years old boy recorded many girls’ personal activities without their awareness and threatened them.
To conclude, some persons are involving in criminal undertakings by using technology innovations. However, in most situations, technology helps society greatly like save girls’ life, reduce crime actions, and so on. Though the technology has several noticeable demerits, if they are handled well by the general public, definitely the merits outweigh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this surveillance' or 'these surveillances'?
Suggestion: this surveillance; these surveillances
... the number plates of vehicles by using these surveillance security cameras. In addition, these ob...
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut their awareness and threatened them. To conclude, some persons are involving ...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ed them. To conclude, some persons are involving in criminal undertakings by using techn...
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Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...merits, if they are handled well by the general public, definitely the merits outweigh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84789644013 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94926606406 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0239608322 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.1052631579 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2631578947 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319399558403 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10163912111 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685876816142 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200587593122 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10411282301 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.35 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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