Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
Most of the working people not doing exercise in their working days or even in their leisure time and have health problems as a result. This essay will discuss the main reasons why many working people not doing adequate workouts including that they are not able to spend time and their less awareness on healthcare. This essay will also suggest solutions to this problem including managing time and improving passion towards healthcare.
Working persons not having sufficient physical activities because of not managing time properly and not consider their health until they face health illnesses. Nowadays, people working on long hours due to their job nature and do not take much care of their physical fitness. For example, 73% of todays’ generation suffers from obesity because of their less physical activities. This often results in health illnesses because of not spending much time on physical workouts.
People need to know how to manage time for improving their fitness. Initially, they may prepare a time chart for practicing exercise time management. Also, people can attend health fitness webinars given by experts to increase their passion for fitness. A recent study says that people who are doing workouts for one hour daily will get sick rarely. Therefore, to avoid health sicknesses, one must do exercise regularly.
In conclusion, working folks not doing enough workouts on their weekdays and suffer from physical illnesses as a result. This essay discussed the reasons why working people not able to do the exercise properly. This essay also suggested that the solutions to this problem are twofold: to manage exercise time and to improve desire towards fitness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27407407407 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45233295045 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5130937286 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427138977058 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158826799163 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109846294917 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281950904683 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933550739337 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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