You have rented a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom.
Write a letter to the estate agency. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe the problems with the house
say what you would like to happen
Dear Sir or Madam,
My two friends and I stay in one of your houses and I am writing to let you know that we are facing some problems in that house. Our rent was recently increased and, as we are all students it is difficult for us to pay. The house is perfectly suited for us; however, it requires some renovation.
Let me explain the problems in detail. The front gate of the house is not closing properly, which makes the house less secure. In bath rooms’ pipes, the water flow is less for the past week due to the sediment of dust in the water tank. To get enough water supplies, the water tank needs to be cleaned well. As well as, the rent is not affordable to us from last month. I hope you will consider our problems favorably.
Would you kindly allow us to share the spare room with another student? If you could accept this, the rent will be afforded to all four of us. Also, we will be grateful if you could fix the house problems as soon as possible.
Thanks for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the sediment of dust in the water tank. The water tank needs to be cleaned to get e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38020833333 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29412155445 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7101831323 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0714285714 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286877544468 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897285983092 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935947053932 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155457481628 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12995068841 0.0580467560999 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.